The bar looked like midnight, or maybe 2 a.m. at last call, it was so dark. The mirrors against the wall were stained in permanent fog and nicotine, even though smoking had been banned for the last ten years. The speeded-out bartender came out from her perch and wobbled her head toward Ginger as if to sexily say “what would you like?” But nothing came from her mouth, only a jaw grinding smile as she loosely placed her arms on the cooler. “Can I get a Jack n’ Coke please?” Ginger asked her in response. The bartender nodded, her jet black hair forward with yes and back with of course. She ambled to the bottles behind her and served the drink. Ginger left a five in front of her. She hadn’t had a jack and coke in a long time. She could feel her nerve endings begging to come out of her skin, a slight twitch in her eye that always gave way to her anxiety and a tightness in her chest. As the swinging doors creaked open and Jerry sauntered in, light followed him, unwelcome into ...
These are various short stories I have written. In forms of parody, crime noir, stream of consciousness, and flash fiction. I'd love your feedback and or comments.